There are errors, here and there, in the translation. For instance, "She is show you many flowers of the surface world," should probably be "She can show you" or "She will show you". Adding the check_translation tag.

You can edit that stuff yourself, you know; just mouse over the notebox and click on the translation.

Gollgagh said:
You can edit that stuff yourself, you know; just mouse over the notebox and click on the translation.

Yep. But editing something means getting no credit. On the other hand, if you point typos, people are forced to see that you did your homework and are in awe of your l33t 4VV350|\/|3 5|<1LL.