This could not end badly.

Seiga has the right attitude. I approve of her methods.

Lazily opted for Funetik Aksent for the dialectal quirk in Yoshika's first ofuda.

I am too amused by his comics to be concerned about how exactly the comics could be made better. I guess I like them just as they are. I find good humour a quality on its own, That's why a lot of my favourite posts on this site are not ones that look like they're drawn by Michelangelo himself.

Now you're thinking like a touhou Seiga.

Trollosuke said:

This could not end badly.

Agreed. And overloads won't be catastrophic either.

I think the comics are fine as is. They're simple yet amusing, and personally, I like the way the hands and faces look.

Also, yes Seiga you must press on FOR SCIENCE!

They are plenty amusing, but there is always room for improvement.
I think he could improve on the hands, faces and backgrounds while keeping the same style.

Do it, Seiga! YOU MUST!

I support this SCIENCE! full heartedly.

ThunderBird said:

Agreed. And overloads won't be catastrophic either.

Ever seen the US commercial for Yoshi's Island?

ZomBoobs!
Edit: I really like setz drawing style, it makes this comic unique.

Is there any way to tell Setz he's great and that there's nothing to criticize?

The_Vault_Dweller said:

Is there any way to tell Setz he's great and that there's nothing to criticize?

Artists want constructive criticism.

Zachary_Nox said:

I think the comics are fine as is. They're simple yet amusing, and personally, I like the way the hands and faces look.

Also, yes Seiga you must press on FOR SCIENCE!

Silverpraetorian said:

I support this SCIENCE! full heartedly.

For Science...you monster...

Personally, I find the Setz's angled artstyle and simple colors uniquely charming. The simple background doesn't distract the reader from focusing on the joke since overly detailed images tend to make your eyes wander all over the place.

As people have said before, the most important improvement I could think of would be to keep anatomical proportions consistent.

As for the joke... They're witty and amusing as they are. He might feel like running out of gag material, but I'm sure there will be plenty to pick from the fandom.

Despite Seiga's new found interest I can't help but feel all warm and fuzzy at how happy Yoshika looks.

Keep on truckin', Setz.

Constructive criticism, huh?

Aside from the stuff already said by posters above, I'd like to see Setz play a little more with angle/point of view/close-ups. It's a little hard to describe. But I notice that in a lot of his comics, we viewers are always at about the same distance from the characters. Figuratively, if we pretend that each panel is a picture taken by camera, it feels like Setz relies on the same shots, poses, and angels. I'm aware that, for shorts/4koma like these, that formula works. But if I wanted to see more from Setz the artist, I'd like to see him play some more with perspective.

I quite like the comics as they are.

As for other artwork, I'd like to see more stuff like the mustard Koishi papercraft, the salmiakki Flan, etc.

More "Living with unstable Koishi" would rock.

The expressions and faces are one of my favourite parts of the comic, not much to improve from what I can see.

More Dork Souls is my request.

I don't wanna sound like an asshole(any more than I already am), but wouldn't Yoshika's body gather the energy/mass evenly divided in to her butt, boobs and thighs? And larger amounts would start adding inches to her hips and belly as much...

But....still...Thank you, Setz. You're doing an awesome job...

Jatka samaan malliin ^^

Not much to say or add here.

If anything, I'd really like to see more DORK SOULS, and the inclusion of hamsters.

As for more detailed backgrounds, well... don't spend too long on them, is what I'd like to say.

Jokes-wise, that's where reading a lot comes in. At least you don't have to recycle the same joke over and over or fixate on something. (Which is just about everything I do for humor.)

Jossikka ^^

Seiga narrated:

[...] rintoihin.

Wait, so the words for "chest" and "breast" are the same in Finnish, too?

(Serious question, not a joke)

Purokuri said:

Wait, so the words for "chest" and "breast" are the same in Finnish, too?

(Serious question, not a joke)

Yes.

Purokuri said:

Wait, so the words for "chest" and "breast" are the same in Finnish, too?

(Serious question, not a joke)

True but with a small difference. When talking about breasts the Finnish word for "chest" is always a plural.

Higusan said:

True but with a small difference. When talking about breasts the Finnish word for "chest" is always a plural.

I see. But what if you want to talk about one particular breast, like "I have cancer in my right breast", for instance?

Purokuri said:

I see. But what if you want to talk about one particular breast, like "I have cancer in my right breast", for instance?

Yeah, the singular works fine, too. Boobs just tend to come in pairs, so the usual way to distinguish between chest and boobs is to see multiple breasts are being talked about.

Inb4 breast puns.