If you're so upset with the translations then why don't you do it yourself? I'm not getting paid to do this and I don't need to do this. Since my TLing sucks so much, be my guest and translate this entire series yourself. I quit.
Sorry if this sounds harsh, but here we prefer accurate translations or no translations at all. Site policy, I guess...
If you're so upset with the translations then why don't you do it yourself? I'm not getting paid to do this and I don't need to do this. Since my TLing sucks so much, be my guest and translate this entire series yourself. I quit.
You aren't the first Chinese-speaker here who thinks that proficiency in Chinese substitutes for proficiency in Japanese, but you're the first one in recent time who have done a lot of uninformed Japanese-to-English 'translations' WITHOUT bothering to tag on "check_translation", which is why the harshness is necessary. Unless you know the source language, you CANNOT verify the accuracy of 3rd party hard-translated scanlations, which is why the check_translation tag is always warranted in that case (such as when an English speaker copies English notes form a comic/doujin/image hard-translated into English). Even then it is generally not recommended to contribute translations unless you know the source language (we're not expecting professional-standard translations here; you don't have to be completely proficient or fluent, but at minimum you should make some effort to learn the language, using dictionaries if needed, and avoid translating sentence fragments [as well as parts you don't understand], and tag on check_translation if there are any parts you think you understand but suspect there might be something wrong).
Your Chinese-to-English translations are good. I commend you for your Chinese-to-English translation here, which would have gone unnoticed if it weren't for your Chinese source, which has some sentences omitted, presumably because the JP->CN translator doesn't understand some of them.
(Also, most of the ranks [technically command positions] are messed up, which is something to be expected, as military positions generally don't have exact equivalents [explicit ranks like OF-9, yes] in different languages. The exact word I used here in the English translation is also sorta inadequate, as 総師 can mean leader/chief/commander-in-chief depending on context, but Commodore [OF-6] is grossly inaccurate.)
This is exactly why it is risky to play the telephone game. There are more translators who can screw up, and there is no one-to-one correspondence between two languages, so inevitably some of the details would go missing (or be distorted) even if both translators were reasonably competent.
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Inazuma Thunder - (11)
DESRON Commander of Team Black Marlin
Same year as the protagonist Fubuki. Very excited about her new life.Pink Ranger - Jun'you (21)
Comes from a rich family like all other Jun'yous.
Living with her fiance, and lives the free life of a shipgirl thanks to the support of a fiance who understands her.
Became the Pink Ranger solely because her hair is pink. Has no special thoughts on the friends of justice part.Green Ranger - Yuubari (17)
Took the job to save her impoverished home village. Famed for her world-class rattle performances in her youth, but was kicked out after being drawn in by the dark side of rattles.Yellow Ranger- I-8 (19)
Troubled by lack of recognition from being a German ship. Uses her book-casted magic as a character establishment point.
Appears to have reached chapter 4 of her magic tome. Became a friend of justice for a chance to legally murder other German ships.Supreme Commander Jacques (55)
An Admiral serving in Rabaul, he is also the Supreme Commander of Team Black Marlin, whose aim is world domination.
A veteran soldier who took part in the "battle" 10 years ago.
During a peacekeeping mission after the war, he encountered an incident where the shipgirls fighting off Abyssals in a foreign country were killed by terrorist suicide bombers from local radicals upset with the United Nations Army.
Thus he came to believe that "Compared to the evil opposing justice, unwarranted charity can also become malice in the eyes of others"
To teach children and make them consider whether their own actions are truly "good" in the eyes of others, he took up the mantle of evil and tried to conquer the world.
That said, on most days he's merely a gentle gramps sort of admiral. He mainly battles at the Salmon Sea. Is quite fond of the hand-crafted prosthetic he received from his shipgirls. Dark General Mutsu (22)
Captain of Team Black Sailfish (Flagship)
Thanks to her incredibly strong powers of misfortune, she foresaw the impending threat of the netherworld.
Seeks to find a way to combat the threat under the guise of the Dark General.
Is sisters with the captain of the Kancolle Rangers, Nagato.
Knows her sister's brain is incapable of understanding something so difficult, and thus held no expectations in her.
Is usually a normal flagship who takes care of secretarial duties, is a gentle sister.Blue Dragon Souryuu (20)
Captain of the Carrier fleet of Team Black Sailfish.
She became Souryuu simply because the conditions met, but her current life is very fulfilling.
Currently recruiting a boyfriend, but due to the mostly female environment of the shipgirl business, she has not found any takers and is quite troubled.
Originally formed the Double Dragon duo with Fly Dragon, but since Fly Dragon married and is on maternal leave, she has to fight on her own.
Huge tits.
Huge tits.White Ranger - Shimakaze (13)
Sub-Leader of the Kancolle Rangers.
Graduated from college at the tender age of 9. Even when studying abroad in America, due to her gifted talents, she found no sense of accomplishment in what she did while whittling her days away.
Until one day, she met someone who she would later take up as her life tutor, "Speed Bro", and changed her worldview.
For the wonders of culture and the extremes of speed, she vowed to return home. Disregarding the protests of those around her, she took the compatibility test and became the shipgirl Shimakaze.
Aside from commanding the Kancolle Rangers in the Admiral's and Nagato's place, she works at a military research facility to develop next-generation engines.Black Ranger - Nagato (23)
Leader of the Kancolle Rangers, flagship of Admiral Akai.
Said to be the strongest among all the younger Nagatos in active duty, her Justice Levels is over 500.
The apprentice of the Legendary Nagato who's already retired.
She faithfully inherited the teachings from her master, such as "When in doubt, use more gun" "Use more dakka and you'll hit" "Go point blank and you'll hit" "Fists are OK too", among others.
Loves destroyers, little things, and cute things.
Seems like she doesn't quite like complicated affairs because they are hard to understand.
Mostly trains on workdays.Akai Masayoshi (22)
Commands the Kancolle Rangers to protect the world's peace on his own accord, he is an Admiral serving in Rabaul.
Favorite words are "Love", "Friendship", "Justice", and "Hot-blooded"
Both his parents have already passed away, left a beautiful older sister at his hometown.
Greatly respecting his brother-in-law who protected the common people until his last moments, he fights to pass on his beliefs of love, friendship and justice to the next generation.
Mostly takes part in volunteering activities on weekdays.