So, question about the first bubble, how should I be translating it? She says Dancho-chan (which is captain, leader, etc (I've seen it translated as so many different things)) twice, but it sounds awkward in english. I put in a "hey" in the middle and I hope that makes it better?
Also Naru is a cutie. Even more so with that twintail thing she's trying to do.
So, question about the first bubble, how should I be translating it? She says Dancho-chan (which is captain, leader, etc (I've seen it translated as so many different things)) twice, but it sounds awkward in english. I put in a "hey" in the middle and I hope that makes it better?
Also Naru is a cutie. Even more so with that twintail thing she's trying to do.
By from what the game is translated. It was captain, in another game (Flower Knight Girl) it's leader.
By from what the game is translated. It was captain, in another game (Flower Knight Girl) it's leader.
From what I see, it's basically a captain-position so anything implying a higher rank is alright, my problem is the fact that translating it as "Captain, captain" or "Leader, leader" sounds awkward, just wanted pointers on how I could possibly make it sound less awkward.
From what I see, it's basically a captain-position so anything implying a higher rank is alright, my problem is the fact that translating it as "Captain, captain" or "Leader, leader" sounds awkward, just wanted pointers on how I could possibly make it sound less awkward.
Use captain instead, since she was trying to get his attention
