Roughly Translated~
Please feel free to pick my errors and fix them~ you are more than welcome to do so~~

First, most noticeable, is that "X ni natta" does not mean "used to be X", it means "became X" in the past tense (where X is whatever it's becoming).

I'll go over this another time, when I'm less tired. It's hard to read the messier kanji.

BarefeetChaser said:
Roughly Translated~
Please feel free to pick my errors and fix them~ you are more than welcome to do so~~

sgcdonmai said:
First, most noticeable, is that "X ni natta" does not mean "used to be X", it means "became X" in the past tense (where X is whatever it's becoming).

I'll go over this another time, when I'm less tired. It's hard to read the messier kanji.

Thank you for the translations! ^_^

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