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Hoshiguma & Chen
Fanart of Hoshiguma and Chen getting into a street fight. This was mostly an exercise where I try to figure out how to draw a background with perspective, streets, and buildings by closely following and learning from a reference.
Even though I like how each individual component turned out (characters, bg), I feel like something is off when everything is put together, but I can't quite place it. Is it the composition? the color choice? lighting/values? Not sure.
ใขใผใฏใใคใใฎใใทใฐใใจใใงใณใฎใใกใณใขใผใ๏ผๆใใใจใใซใ็ฆ็นใฏ่ๆฏใฎๅๅผทใงใใใ่ณๆใใดใฃใใ่ฆใใฐใ็บใฎ่ๆฏใใงใใใใใใใชใใจๆใใพใใใใพใใใใใใกใใกใญใฃใฉใ่ๆฏใๆชใใชใใจๆใใใงใใใฉใๅใใใใใชใใ้ๅๆใใใใพใใ็็ฑใฏใพใ ใใใใพใใใ