My comprehension skills really aren't good enough to know if you made any mistakes in translation, though I did edit some of your notes to make it more readable. Thanks for your time and effort.
Taloldaloldaamlolol!Wait, wait, this isn't here, is it?!This!Yeh, calm down it is.Youmu...Well then, I'm counting on you, he's starting to get on my nerves by tagging along.If Reimu-tan entrusted me to you, willingly lolol Naito lol OK come and go lolol.
I could not come up with something more comprehensible.Let's see...E-eh... it's hopeless...I want to go home... I want to go home anyhow...But after all the trouble, maybe I should try to hear him out.I certainly get the feeling, that he has some secret behind that kind of behavior.Maybe he'd seem more like a normal person, if he stopped laughing so much.I even think, he could be a great man in some way....uwaa lolol wuss wrong lol Youmu-tan lolWhy are you always laughing, Naito?..Ob lol vi lol ously, because even death backs off when Great Me smiles lololWhy did I even think of hearing him out...It's a waste lol Youmu-tan doesn't show her cute smile more often lol.Wha-what are you saying!?Uwa? lololI... haven't shown my smiling face recently, eh?I lol can lol see it lol.
Giving it your all and taking any duty seriously lol is Youmu-tan's good point. lololBut sometimes it's better to relax, take a laugh and let thigs go by lolololThat lol is what Me thinks lolol...It's pretty certain you'll continue to laugh even if a world crisis will arise, won't you?Uwaa, you lol making me lol feel lol shy lol...I don't get praised usually.Just lol do your best in lol your lol own lol pace lololOf course, Naito does what expected from him.
This one doesn't feel right too.Um? lol...No, you're right...For nowI'll try to start smiling more often.Ok lololol that's the spirit lolStill, what do you honestly think about the way you laugh?Uwaa lolol ok lolthumpEven if you say that...Eeeh?You should smile brightly from time to time.Err, I mean, um... your smile or something.You're only getting wrinkles between your eyebrows.Yeah, yeah, smiling is important -ze.Aand we brought you a teacher.Your spirit seems kinda down in the dumps lately.Mornin' lolol you called lolol I came flying lolPlease, do not avert your eyes!It is that Naito, like Buront-san?You will surely find some use for him... maybe.I can keep my adult-like composure properly, if I start taking things seriously lol don't worry, Youmu-tan lololSeriousSmile more often...Wai... You are dumping him on me...This man really resembles Naito in some way...Huh?