Kouji did another revision, most notably Tokonatsu's eyes are now visible and has bigger thigh shadows.
Also added movement line on second last panel

Mikufan said:

Kouji did another revision, most notably Tokonatsu's eyes are now visible and has bigger thigh shadows.
Also added movement line on second last panel

Then this version should be the parent^^.

Marked it as "Partially translated" since the very last panel is missing. What's written there above her head?

Provence said:

Marked it as "Partially translated" since the very last panel is missing. What's written there above her head?

It sound of door closed

that's a door-closing sound effect

Provence said:

Marked it as "Partially translated" since the very last panel is missing. What's written there above her head?

From the "translated" tag.

Additionally, it's okay to leave out the tag on posts with very small and insubstantial notes, such as single onomatopoeia that could just as well go untranslated. Anything more than that should be tagged. See also forum #2465.

Literally speaking, it's "patan..." which, as others pointed out, is the sound of the door closing.

Tokonatsu clinging to his sanity with all his might.
Clinging to what's left of his sanity anyway.
Strong he is, but up against an enemy formidable beyond mortal understanding.

Tokonatsu bravely ran away.

Mincemaker said:

Tokonatsu bravely ran away.

Correction: Tokonatsu went for 'mental training'.

Mincemaker said:

Tokonatsu bravely ran away.

The tale of sir Tokonatsu.(Who nearly man up and go for it...who nearly lost his restraint...and who had fell for Fubooty's seduction hook, line, and sinker and run away)